把你绕进去的雅思写作 我该拿什么来拯救你?

2018-09-06  阅读: 306

有些题目感觉每一个单词都认识,但就是读不懂,或者不知道怎么切入更好,比较典型地容易把我们绕进去地出题方式有:

1. 含有因果关系的题目

More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore, people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

吐槽时间:手机交流,一般打字和语音。更多时候发点表情包啥的,又没有面对面,怎么会影响面对面的能力呢?


2. 完全无关的两个 views

Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

吐槽时间:这两个完全不相关(至少看似不相关的)的领域:环境和全球商业,怎么去 compare,如何能 discuss 的呢?


3. 完全不冲突的两个 views

Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress at work. They should only care about the quality of the work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

吐槽时间:关注着装,为啥就不能关注工作能力?(穿的好的,就不能好好工作么?)

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当然,雅思写作毕竟本质还是考察我们的语言能力,而不是逻辑反驳能力。面对这些的“活见鬼”题目,威学雅思教研组推荐考生更合适的处理方式是:

1. 完全分开去写

Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

科技让生活变复杂了,所以我们要简化生活,不用这些新科技?我个人观点是支持前半句,而不支持后半句的。(当然,你也可以前后两个分句都支持,或者都不支持,或者跟我的观点完全相反。)

所以,我们的文章结构就是:

主体段 1:承认科技让生活复杂化了,举例,比如在工作上,明明当面能讲清楚的事情,必须写一封正式的邮件,层层提交审核,耽误事情。
主体段 2:但是不应该放弃对于科技的依赖。因为,太多的工作、生活、学习,已经完全离不开新技术了,比如 email 技术。如果不去使用,反而会带来非常多的麻烦。

真实地去表达自己,把因和果两个部分分开去评论,会让整体更加容易处理。花太多时间纠结这个因果关系,往往适得其反。

N.B. 有的时候,so 前面是一个事实描述,而不是观点,那就没有必要专门去 diss 前者了。比如:针对孩子的广告越来越多,so some people think 他们不好,要控制。

so 前面描述事实,我们不能在文章中说:我没有发现很多针对孩子的广告,所以观点不成立。

2. 折中,承认其不冲突

The government should spend money in promoting sports and art in school, rather than sponsoring professional sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

学校里面的推广,和社会层面的推广,我个人是觉得不冲突的。学校培养的是种子,以后会开花结果。而资助专业运动和艺术项目,更加直接,对于此时此刻的体育和艺术产业更好。

两者对我而言,并不冲突。如果一定要比出一二来,反而会特别困难。主体段还是分开去描述,到了结尾,我们承认两边不冲突,建议政府同时支持即可。

In conclusion, investment in sporting and artistic activities in school and support for social events related to sports and arts are equally important and mutually unexclusively. Within budget, the government should finance these two aspects.

3. 折中,分类讨论

Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress at work. They should only care about the quality of the work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

其实,是否注重着装,需要看情况来讲。比如服务行业,直接面对客户,需要得体地着装,既是为了服务好客户,也是为了表示尊重。

而一些行业,完全不用面对客户,例如程序猿,大部分时候在电脑面前,编辑和优化软件后台,适当放松着装要求,或者即便人字拖,大背心,也未尝不可。

这一个自己观点的折中段,写出来可以是:

Whether the code of dressing should be prioritized in the workplace largely depends on the area of the occupation. As for those working in service industry, who have to directly interact with customers and clients, being well dressed is showing respect. As for those employed in internet companies, for example, they should be allowed to dress casually, since their work responsibilities are mainly related to programming and optimizing the background system.


以上是威学雅思教研组今天的内容。希望雅思成为你人生中非常小,但是却很重要的部分。学习雅思,借此巩固和提升英语水平,会为我们打开一扇又一扇通往不同的,更好的人生方向的大门